...time passes as quickly as a white colt glimpsed through a crack in the wall.
- Nichiren Daishonin (1222-1282)
- "What do I write this week?," I asked a friend.
- "Why, don't you have any work?,"... Read The Article
indeed a priceless gift. just one remark - i've come to know how much you trully love the things you love, in this case Tolstoi. a personal opinion is that you should stick to your own experiences, since you are really good at narating them, making them lively and enjoyable to read, and leave aside the consacrated writers and any reveiew, no matter how passanger, on their motivations. if you ask me, the paasage about Tolstoi had nothing to do in this story. don't compare yourself with anyone ..no matter how good or bad. you are unique just like them in their turns are unique.
( Posted: Wednesday, October 17, 2007 at 12:41 )
sailee
Manish....you are just too good! You have put together Transition thoughts so well! Philosophical touch but very deep &touching heart! Its worded well but try to be little cohesive you have potential what need is opportunity of expression..Keep it up!!
( Posted: Tuesday , October 16, 2007 at 12:23 )
Sanjay
Satisfactory, I always believed that writing is an art and difficult to master, using the right expression for feelings is not just difficult but just next to impossible. You are doing steady growth... i must confess. The piece is nice but you need to be consistant with your thoughts soon after your intro to stories. I have been following your stories. This one is closer to your ...Crow... story. You CAN do better...
( Posted: Tuesday , October 16, 2007 at 07:56 )
Raju
Sorry, but I could read about half of your write-up and the last paragraph only, which of course, I couldn’t relate to the earlier explanations. Please be little bit specific and summaries it to at least 60% of its length.
( Posted: Monday , October 15, 2007 at 22:36 )
Malavika
I really enjoyed this piece. Way to go!
( Posted: Monday , October 15, 2007 at 16:39 )
ug
your mastery with words keeps the article alive! but to me it is like a long tapestry with bits of bright pen pictures woven into it, where the weaver got lost in his thougts and didn't care much about the theme that he had set for himself.
( Posted: Monday , October 15, 2007 at 16:39 )
shiv
Hey Manish; u really seem to be connecting things well.Took some time to read it, but it was a pleasure reading it. Awaiting for some more of ur gems. :)
( Posted: Monday , October 15, 2007 at 16:35 )
tanushree
the concept and the content are really good , i liked it , but the shift from your school days and your office was a bit confusing . Was it Sarcastic ?? n i would also like to know about the title this time
( Posted: Monday , October 15, 2007 at 15:22 )
A
Manish,
Another great piece....and it feels good to know that you have such a positive perspective towards obstacles....indeed all obstacles are stepping stones to success....it is not just gyaan....it is true...
Kep up the great work...I'm sure you will make a great author someday very soon.
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